soldiers of soul ( digt )

tja følte mig kreativ så jah, lavede et digt, trololo.

all i feel, is the bomb hitting my mind, by the word's that made pain in the world.
everyday i need a bulletproof vest to feel safe from the hate agains me.
i always raise from pieces, like a secret, because im a soldier of soul.
take a telefon and call you're family to make sure they are safe.
the countdown always there for the charge, when you attack.
unite and fight with me, to make a better life, we are ready.
to night, i rise, because i try to run from the chaos but fall on me knees.
but when the scar heals, the pain passes, it always begin again.
my future is here and now, i try to keep going on, because that's what i do.
it's time to fight and changed my tactic, because i need a better life from my pain.
my love, my family, are they safe today? to night, i fight, for a better life.
everyday i need to sleep, but i can't, because i can't go on, not for long.
but i will never give up, no i can't, because im a soldier of soul, are you?.
a fist in the face, when you turn the other cheek, go back, and try again.
the countdown never stop, because we live in this world to make a better life.
to night, i fight, FIGHT!, to night, i FIGHT, because that's what i do.
to make a better life, better that use rage and hate, because of my scar.
i will raise from the asheh, and look at the sky in a bright new day.
but the night call me, because i need to fight, to unite in peace.
because i need a better life, away from the pain, there always in my soul.
i rise, because it's day, and when the world go mad, i will look in peace.
because then the world will leave me alone, to my love and familiy.
but the world never let me go, because im a soldier of soul.
rise in wars, like a soldier, but just of soul, to advance the pain.
to night, i fight, to make a better life, without the pain in my soul, and head.
time is dying, so unite, and FIGHT!, to make a better life, even when it's all black.
because all is see is black shatterede pieces, everday i need to look the sun in the mid.
because my future is here and now, but this is my call, to fight in the night, away from life.
because im a soldier of soul, everyday i fight, because that's what i do, i made myself what i am.
i will rise, always rise from the asheh, to look at a new day, at my love, and my familiy.
i try to escape the pain, but without luck, so i burn the pain down with a lot of fights.
my future is calling me, so i can rest in peace, with my love and familiy.
but not forever.. for am i Soldier Of Soul, i fight in the night and love in the day.

det lidt usammenhængende, men tja håber folk kan se pointen og forstå det.

hilsen Teddy.

Jeg synes det er et meget hjertefølt digt.
Meget barsk , det fortæller mig du ønsker en bedre fremtid - men måske har svært ved rigtig at tro på det ?

And lay off the fighting , sweetie - We HAVE taljes about that.
Just Walk away.

- de bedste tanker
Millicent

tak, Sis, og tja du har helt ret, are you reading my mind? i hope not.. gods know what i do to you o_o

i know, i try, and i got better, but again, sometimes i just can't hold it, and i lose my shit o.x

tak :o

What you'll do to me ? Make me pancakes, please ? :p

Jeg læser ikke dine tanker nej, men jeg mærker dine ord , kan man vel sige.
For mig skal et digt ikke rationaliseres eller overanalyseres- det har jeg altid ment ødelagde det hele.
Man skal bare....mærke ordene....og fortælle det første der falde ind.
Somme tider rammer det forfatternes mening / holdning/ sindsstemning
Andre gange er man way off....men for mig er digte og andet kunst en individuel oplevelse :)

Og sådan oplevede jeg dine ord....

And if you just try your best- no one can tell you to do better .

hehe, tak, sis :3

tak for dine ord ^^ mere kan jeg sku ikke rigtig sige :3