Mr. Teddy (Engelsk digt)

Halløjsa gutinder og gutter, som end vil læse dette ^^
Hvis i lyster, så må i endelige føle jer frie til at komme med jeres mening om den så er positiv eller ej ^^

Når men her er den så ^^

Mr. Teddy

Suddenly I woke up in the middle of night,
a strange cold spot is by my side.
Something is missing, something truly important.
My soft comfortable bed friend is gone.
Where are you my dear Mr. Teddy?

It is getting more lonely and cold for every night.
The empty spot is getting more colder and more unfamiliar.
Feeling like a stranger in my old bed
how would I ever be able to sleep well again?
Dear Mr. Teddy, come back.

The cold empty spot was too much for me.
So I found dear miss Teddy
But it was not the same at all,
it still feels so heartbreaking unfamiliar.
Why can't you be like Mr. Teddy?

Of course she was lovely and filled with warmth.
But she hadn't the same fluffiness as you.
She did not have the calming smell.
Miss Teddy will forever be a stranger to me.
Keep away from me with your false dreams Miss Teddy.

Never more sleeping the night away in blissful dreams,
because I'm missing my dearest and only lullaby.
She had a beautiful and dream full voice,
but the memories broke the value of her lullaby.
Her voice could never reach to the seven heavens as Mr. Teddy.

Missing the nightlong trips down the La Seine of dreams.
Ooohhh nnnooo she and no other teddy can ever be like you.
They can't give me the feeling of the childhood's dreams,
when they never have been the dreams of mine.
Mr. Teddy... Mr. Teddy.... Mr. Teddy... My dear Mr. Teddy.

Her fluffy skin affected me in such a way,
that my privation only grew stronger.
Why aren't you like Mr. Teddy!
I screamed and tossed her into the wall.
These soul-full tears are for you Mr. Teddy,

Still remembering, still trapped in memories.
You were my loyal bed partner.
You were the one who lay closest to me at night.
You are the one who have touched my naked skin.
Stand by my side as my night friend again Mr. Teddy.

We two have always been able to lay all night under the duvet,
oohhh we did play so many games under our duvet
while every part of my pale skin lay naked against your softness.
You are the only one, who have been so damn close.
Mr Teddy hear my prayer I.. No forget it.

You were the one, who have touched my innocence of my child.
You are my partner in crime, even when I was little child
and even now where I'm grown up in this world.
Got a new Teddy, but threw it away again.
No more time for play, it is time for seriousness
Now that you are gone.

Okay jeg har hermed mistet alt frygt relateret respekt til Vladimir, når du skriver om din sovebamse XD

Nej nu til det seriøse, gud skal jo selv være seriøs en gang imellem.
Mmmm jeg syntes at den er i sig selv rigtig godt skrevet, kan godt lide, at den nederste linje i hver vers er en direkte henvendelse til den såkaldte bamse.
Og selvom det er om en bamse/flere bamser, så føler jeg, at du i virkeligheden ikke taler om bamser right?
Når men anyway den kan forståes på mange måder, og syntes alligevel at der er en god pointe i det, hvis man tager det fra bamseperspektivet, da den giver et billede af, hvordan man skal give slip på det gamle og komme videre, selvom det er svært.
Håber du kunne bruge det til noget,
Hilsen
Gud :D

Hahahaha jeg kan godt forstå, hvad du mener XD
Vladibamsemir! ha :D godt jeg ikke arbejder for dig

Vladibamsemir? Wow jeg tror, at vi har en vinder i navngivning :D

Hhmmmm selvfølgelig er der nogle grammatiske fejl hist og her, men skam ikke det alvorligste, at det kommer til at ødelægge pointen i digtet.
Jeg i er sig selv enig med den kære Rodan, at der virker meget mere i dybden i dette digt, da nogle af de ting, som bliver beskrevet, er ikke noget som jeg kan se den 100% klare mening, og der virker helt klart til at ligge noget bag ved det.
Selvfølgelig er deet både godt og dårligt, man får en hvis nysgerrighed, som gør digtet interessant, men samtidig bliver det for internt, så vi sidder lidt her og mangler noget.
Men heldigvis er den godt beskrevet, og så er det især interessant, at det handler om en bamse(r), hvilket man ikke ser tit.
Så jeg ville give 4/6 digtestjerner for dette digt ^^