i only want you.. ( lost love poet )

jeg følte mig kreativ, og syntes den kreative side ting følte sig lidt ensom, så ja.. skrev et digt, håber i vil nyde og kommentere jeres mening!.

i know i was wrong, i know deserted, i know i did run away.
i know everybody fears, i know everybody bleeds, but i do also.
im not made of stone, even when i try to predent to.
everyday i bow down to feel free, but i do not.
i lost you, and i can't compromised, or apologize.
im born with my own curse, there is mine alone.
so plz don't leave me, i only want you.
i try not to hurt, nor to forget, but in the end what's what happen.
every time it's happen, i cry and feel weak, like a newbie.
i feel the cold breath over my shoulder, where you should be.
every day i just want to feel free, with you.
deep inside i know what i am worth, a life of my own.
it should have been much more worse, and i try to make it right again.
i try to make it right with you, so you one's again can open you're arms for me.
i know i hurt you, deserted you, make you feel alone, but now i see it clear.
i just want to pull you closer to me, then tighter, cause i know you can disappear.
i just can't compromise, but i will apologize, and hope for you're forgiveness.
there nothing i can say to calm you, but i can be there, and stay there, for you.
but we both don't know how it will end this time, so let's fight again, together again.
every day i pain's, every day it's hurt, not to be with you, because you calm my pain.
the pain in my soul, the pain in my mind and in my head, i know it sound's insane.
every day we make it go good, better day for day, but i hope i can stay with you.
my soul is aching for release, so i can stay with you, so you not are alone.
everybody lives, and that's what we should do, with our painfull life.
but one's day we leave's the life, and i hope we can stay together, forever.
so i will beg the best i can, for you're forgiveness, on my knees.
i may got a disease, but i hope you can live with it, like i do.
but i will not again, let you be all alone, in you're own dark, like i did last time.
it could have been much more worse, but i only can hope for you to forgive me.
yea, i know i hurt you, deserted you, but i hope you in you're heart can forgive me.
it's clear what i much do, and i hope you let me do what i have to do.
to let me love you, stay with you.

skrevet af Teddy, og kan sku ikke huske tidspunktet.
føl jer frie til og skrive jeres mening :3

venlig hilsen, Teddy, AKA The Horny Wolf, The Snugle Bear, og Boxer :3

Haha, det lyder som en vred rap der kunne være i en ny sang, men det engelske vakler lidt hist og pist. Jeg synes i hvert fald at du skal fortsætte med at øve dig og skrive mere! C:

Jeg har kommenteret før på dine digte, sylvia.

Grammatik er mig helt ligegyldigt, da jeg suger følelserne til mig og ser på dem istedet.
Det er interessant at Mzia ser det som vredt- og det viser jo hvordan vi alle tolker gennem et personligt filter, hvilke er en ting som alt kunst bringer frem i os tror jeg.

Når jeg læser det, ser jeg ikke den vrede, jeg ser tvært om en slags erkendelse....en indrømmelse...en hjerteskærende bøn .og en meget stor kærlighedserklæring.
En heldig pige der kan nå dit hjerte på den måde. Og du er heldig at du er istand til at føle så store ting, uanset om kær,igheden er endt godt eller mindre godt :)

Mzia, det skam ikke vred rap, det er som Millimus siger, så det rigtigt i har begge ret, vrede imod mig selv, men også en erkendelse, indrømmelse og en bøn, men ja :3

og Millimus, den er endt godt, og er glade for i syntes om det :3

er igang med et nyt så ja :3

skriver lige her, så alle får mulighed for og se det, hvis de vil owo